Teacher`s+Comments

DRUGS5

25th May 09

= Some good work.. There is a lot of movement on this wiki.. wiki wiki..yeah!--If you focus on organising it in a better way it will help you see what you have and what you need. Some of you are contributing more than others. Remember that if all 4 of you make more contributions then you will advance more! = =It is clear who is participating and who is not..how frequently are you making contributions to the wiki? Are you going in on a daily basis and trying to advance on your inquiry?=

= I have had a good look at your wiki and I can see a lot of hard work from you, I can see you are participating more as a group this week collecting resources..however you need to start synthesising the info. and resources you have.. I have written __comments on some of the discussion pages__ about lines of inquiry, bibliography, interviews + form issues such as spelling, titles of pages, etc. to help you organise the information a bit better on this week. CHECK THEM OUT! =  CHECK THEM... THIS WILL HELP YOU ORGANISE WHERE YOU ARE HEADING! I THINK 3 AND 4 COULD BE INCLUDED IN THE 1ST AND 2ND AND YOU COULD ADD A 3RD ONE MORE RELATED ABOUT WHAT PEOPLE ARE DOING IN CALI IN TERMS OF HELPING DRUG ADDICTION AND MAYBE IN TERMS OF PREVENTION.. FOCUS ON THE LOCAL PART!.. ALSO A LOT OF INFORMATION YOU HAVE SHOW TYPES OF DRUGS..AND YOU DO NOT HAVE THIS AS ONE OF YOUR LINES OF INQUIRY...MAYBE HAVE ANOTHER THOUGHT OVER THESE...
 * LINES OF INQUIRY...**

= Things that you I think are good: = There is more action on the wiki..There is more connection between most of the group members.....Some of you have been contributing a tremendous amount of information which helps you accumulate resources, but you need to organise them and see which key questions/loi are you answering... You have been adding pages to the wiki with all this information.. You have started interviewing and have uploaded videos..

= However some things should have been done that I don`t see are very complete = = By week 2: = = □ Interviews..there is one there but you need to make the connections to key questions and loi = = □ Finding specific information about drug addiction in Cali to focus on the LOCAL issue will make it easier for you to take action and propose solutions. = = □ Uploading Images and videos which are connected to your key questions and loi =

□ Organising the resources, and to start synthesising and answering the key questions, extracting info, writing in your own words to make a balance of what you have and what you need.
 * By week 3: You haven`t started... **

YOU HAVE A BIG TASK NOW...TO ORGANISE ALL THIS INFORMATION AND IDENTIFY WHERE YOU ARE AND WHERE YOU ARE HEADING WITH YOUR INQUIRY!
 * ORGANISE LIST OF PAGES:** CHANGE THE ORDER SO IT MAKES SENSE..MAYBE TYPES OF DRUGS TOGETHER..DELETE WHAT IS NOT NECESSARY OR EMPTY..LEAVE ONLY THE INFORMATION THAT IS USEFUL..MAYBE MAKE A PAGE FOR EXTRA INFORMATION THAT YOU CAN PUT IN WHAT YOU ARE NOT CLEAR ON HOW YOU WILL USE IT..IF USEFUL OR NOT..

GOOD LUCK MRS EXX